Friday, March 20, 2009

The Man I Didn'T Have To Be...... Comments

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When you came into my little world
You brought your young boy and girl
Suddenly, we became a happy family
I was the man, I didn't have to be
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james d nall,jr
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Ben Carlton 30 March 2009

I read this poem and 'Second Chance' as you suggested. I am impressed with both of them. Real feelings are evident in your writing which positively add to the poems substance.

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james d nall,jr

james d nall,jr

blackshear, georgia
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