Thursday, August 29, 2019

The Man From The Desert Comments

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My head lolled as I rode through sun-baked land,
too parched to notice the vistas grand,
Southern Nevada had cursed me with thirst,
a kind that most people will never know.
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David Welch
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Great story of kindness, humanity. There is goodness in everyone. Nobody is born a thief, a trump… Life makes him/her so… top score, dear poet

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 August 2019

Man, YOU can write excellent story. The words kept me in a grip and I continued reading. This is truly full of suspense, like in an old western movies. Since I know Nevada Southern part, so when I started to read I THOUGHT that it happened really. You are a brilliant story teller, David. My great compliments! A 10 Full Score.

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David Welch 30 August 2019

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 August 2019

You're welcome, David.

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 August 2019

Write comment. Well said, David. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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