Saturday, April 6, 2013

The Man From A Distant Star Comments

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He was standing out on the balcony
While the party raged inside,
I’d had enough of the trivial talk,
Boosting each other’s pride,
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David Lewis Paget
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Sally Plumb Plumb 12 April 2013

A hilarious ending. I laughed out loud.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 06 April 2013

Sir after going through, I caught the dualism of our nature, Artificial and natural one in which we hanged and swayed but the title is from distant star...so in 1st stanza inside there were celebration and out side he on the skies and said 'Your sky is rather ordinary, Not in the least like ours! ’decoration of party house and the natural decoration on the sky, I presumed u know better, nice thank u

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David Lewis Paget

David Lewis Paget

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