The Man 4 Comments

Thank you......................

don’t be sad my dearest sun the moon is here to share your light.. very slow and sad write, your style is very beautiful

don’t be sad my dearest sun the moon is here to share your light...nothignto worry so long as somebody is there to share with...life will be dead without anybody in life... i liked it most.....10 anywhere...butterflies around.....

A beautiful tribute to the versatile poet..............

A fne tribute to the masterful Brett....I know that he will cherish your words my dear friend.....thanks for the share of your beautiful soul 10

lovely naiidz...a great tribute to a fellow poet

wonderful dedication to him

This is a beautiful and very kind tribute, Naizz, to a person who was kind enough to help you when you first came to poem hunter. Under his tuteledge, I am sure your skills as a poet were greatly improved. It is alltogether fitting and proper to pay him the respect he deserves, as well as a very courteous gesture on your part.Carl.

sure we cannot allow mr sulaiman to abandon us. he has been a responsible brother and miss him too.nicely written. voted10 surya

sure.mr sulaiman cannot abandon us.nicely told voted10 surya

Dear NAIZZ (LADY GRACE) , I don't know how and whom to address. Suleman's poem I'm yet to read and comment upon.While I was in Singapore, we couldn't meet due to his pre-occupation in business overseas. He is a nice man. Your poem depicts the feelings sensibly and emotionaly.Only two suggestion to maintain the flow properly. choice, of course, is yours. In L 3 & 4, this might look better: 'the moon is here to share your light' and L 7-'billows appear gloomy' Rated high Rajkumar.

you have expressed your emotions very well

I have also requested Sulaiman to continue in PH as he was taking farewell from his friends in PH. Hope he will continue with all our requestes.

lovely lady lovely poem

hmmm? very poetic nice touch

You are, by your words, a sharer. Tis enough. H

I hope Suleman will reconsider his decisions, if he got busy, he must perform his duties, but he can spare some time for us......if we request......

May you shine in the limelight Naidzz.