Wednesday, September 2, 2009

The Man 3 Comments

Rating: 5.0

the way you wet your lips
the naughty words from your eyes
are like views in my heart
that quench my lonely nights..
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lady grace
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Rafique Farooqi 06 September 2009

Very sensational write........i will offer you to read..... Rat on the moon and....the boy with his guitar

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Obinna Eruchie 04 September 2009

How she desires that feeling sensual in a sparking manner from him. Lovely.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 04 September 2009

A sense very sensual write that bites! Maybe Woman 3 and the man 3 could hit it off quite well.... I love this poem and give it a 10

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Raj Nandy 02 September 2009

My Lady, I think that all ladies would like to have your Man-3, with such unique qualities! Thanks! - Raj

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he is lucky i say.. way lucky.. why no woman tell me this.? hehe.

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Mohammed Albalushi 02 September 2009

sexy poem, well done

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Sarwar Chowdhury 02 September 2009

WOW! ! ! intense yammy yammy here penned beautifully! ! 10+

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Catrina Heart 02 September 2009

A great and vivid written sensual composition........i really enjoyed reading it soar high my friend...............10+++++++

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 September 2009

the secrets i want to tell that only you should know the kisses i want to reveal on every inch of your body those are for you, ...so you won't forget that i am yours.. ..it is real feeling emanatingform cleanheart and worth to enjoy poetic skill.. lovely theme n i liked it most....10 read mine kindness we offer & terrotorial integrity

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Joseph Poewhit 02 September 2009

Words put forth much desire of love

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So very sensual My Grace. How could a man resist such mount watering words and poetry that sizzles like this poem does? Passion and romance are your forte and I simply adore this poem. 10 Karin Anderson

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Marieta Maglas 02 September 2009

excellent simile: ''the soft touch on my cheeks and the kisses on my lips are like the songs that you sing in the hour of darkness..'' excellent lyric poem, thank you for sharing...............10+++++++

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Nikunj Sharma 02 September 2009

sensuality and the surrender and the depth of emotions in it....a nice picturisation of man, woman relationship and thought process..... vey good poem, I liked it very much.........

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Eyan Desir 02 September 2009

the way you wet my lips the naughty words from your mouth I felt the lines should be that Good poem for your favorite guy ha... hmmm hope he loves 10s

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 02 September 2009

sensual...pasionate and sweet to...lovely flow...very nice to read naidz

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Hari Khabrani 02 September 2009

your poem seems as intensity being in love with man......

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~ Jon London ~ 02 September 2009

Sensual lines of the hearts desires.....beautifully written by your natural poetess hand.....I love this poem Naizz......10+++ for sure

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Hazem Al Jaber 02 September 2009

amazing sensuality fulness one.. stunning one dear poet.. hazem al..

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Ency Bearis 02 September 2009

lovely poem.... a noteworthy passion to love one....so sweet....10

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Carol Gall 02 September 2009

ohhh lady nice every inch noone could forget beautifully written 10

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