Sunday, August 9, 2009

The Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

the blue sky that traces our smiles
and white clouds that hide our tears
two hearts on silvery wings
faded laces on the wind...
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 24 August 2009

every line is written from the heart. mark 10 shan

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Rafique Farooqi 21 August 2009

So beautifully written words......our hidden emotions get wings to soar....

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Vinod Ak 21 August 2009

A splendid poetic tribute to your husband! Wishing you both a very happy wedding anniversary!

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Raj Nandy 20 August 2009

A VERY HAPPY ANNIVERSARY TO YOU BOTH! Hope he has read your poem? -Raj

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C. P. Sharma 18 August 2009

A touching rememberance with flowing poetic tribute. CP

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Eyan Desir 18 August 2009

well written''''''''''''''''''''''''''''10s

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Sarwar Chowdhury 18 August 2009

very touchy and nice wording! 10+

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Obinna Eruchie 17 August 2009

A heart felt piece beautifully written.

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Ying Escalona 16 August 2009

tubig sa tumoy tumoy nana-ug sa tunga-tunga pobre ug datu maka-inom mag-libog ang huna-huna TUBA! ! !

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Ninya Zulueta 13 August 2009

it still amazes me, how can words make one (almost) cry and feel for a stranger.poetry shall put all walls into ruins i guess..very nice.

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Miriam Maia Padua 13 August 2009

So heartfelt...your great love for him is flowing in this sweet piece you're undying love..floats in the wind.. really touching, my friend... sweet memories to remember... so sad, he left away early but God has plans...and so be it.. Yours..was a love story so amusing, so sweet and worth cherishing for... there maybe tear in our eyes but always a smile in your lips.. He loves you even life after death... Happy anniversary to both of you..I know he is happy watching you and touching you like a soft breeze....and looking back to the times you asked him to check your taekwando belt..the time you asked him those innocent words...smilessss I was so moved by this, my friend....heartfelt write 10++++ lovelots, Maia

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Lalitha iyer 12 August 2009

I have a found a real wife.....................in your words.................

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Rafique Farooqi 11 August 2009

Great and soulful memories touching the membranes of heart and soothing the saddened mind......deep feelings hauntingthge mind

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Ken E Hall 10 August 2009

A deep and personal feeling here and a loss that is never, never ever forgot, lifes road has many holes that part of our lives fall into, Lovely tribute of a poem which saddens me so for I lost my beautiful daughter....just crossing the road. We have to be strong The poem a+++10 regards

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Joseph Poewhit 10 August 2009

Memories carry a lot of weight sometimes

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Catrina Heart 10 August 2009

I have commented on this at first attempt my message was lost unfortunately...Maybe because your husband didn't like my sweet and naughty message for you. Thus I have to write another...well the poem is well written and great, so heartfelt since it came from your heart with so much love and longingness...Then as a poet your are doing great and awesome my friend...Iam so proud of you! ! ! keep on writing...God Bless! ! ! Happy anniversary to both of you and kisses from miles away! WHAT MATTERS MOST..............nah! you know what i mean! the breeze will send you the message tonight!

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Indira Babbellapati 10 August 2009

so long as memories are fresh, death can't touch one...

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Shashendra Amalshan 10 August 2009

Is it true what Carl says Lady Grace! ! ! ! I am sorry! ! ! ! But this one is filled with emotions... You said title was 'The Man'... I honestly didn't know what to expect.. And I found this one, very moving and touching.. Sort of romanitic too.. great one.. lovess Shan

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Eyan Desir 10 August 2009

Very poetic....and well written.....I am impress.....excellent

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Carl Harris 10 August 2009

This is a lovely and deeply touching poem on your late husband, Lady Grace, and a wonderful remembrance of your wedding day anniversary as well. I am certain your good husband loved you very much, and still deeply loves you today from his place in heaven. He brought you much happiness during his lifetime, and even today, thoughts of him still do. Carl.

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