the blue sky that traces our smiles
and white clouds that hide our tears
two hearts on silvery wings
faded laces on the wind...
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So beautifully written words......our hidden emotions get wings to soar....
A splendid poetic tribute to your husband! Wishing you both a very happy wedding anniversary!
A VERY HAPPY ANNIVERSARY TO YOU BOTH! Hope he has read your poem? -Raj
tubig sa tumoy tumoy nana-ug sa tunga-tunga pobre ug datu maka-inom mag-libog ang huna-huna TUBA! ! !
it still amazes me, how can words make one (almost) cry and feel for a stranger.poetry shall put all walls into ruins i guess..very nice.
So heartfelt...your great love for him is flowing in this sweet piece you're undying love..floats in the wind.. really touching, my friend... sweet memories to remember... so sad, he left away early but God has plans...and so be it.. Yours..was a love story so amusing, so sweet and worth cherishing for... there maybe tear in our eyes but always a smile in your lips.. He loves you even life after death... Happy anniversary to both of you..I know he is happy watching you and touching you like a soft breeze....and looking back to the times you asked him to check your taekwando belt..the time you asked him those innocent words...smilessss I was so moved by this, my friend....heartfelt write 10++++ lovelots, Maia
I have a found a real wife.....................in your words.................
Great and soulful memories touching the membranes of heart and soothing the saddened mind......deep feelings hauntingthge mind
A deep and personal feeling here and a loss that is never, never ever forgot, lifes road has many holes that part of our lives fall into, Lovely tribute of a poem which saddens me so for I lost my beautiful daughter....just crossing the road. We have to be strong The poem a+++10 regards
I have commented on this at first attempt my message was lost unfortunately...Maybe because your husband didn't like my sweet and naughty message for you. Thus I have to write another...well the poem is well written and great, so heartfelt since it came from your heart with so much love and longingness...Then as a poet your are doing great and awesome my friend...Iam so proud of you! ! ! keep on writing...God Bless! ! ! Happy anniversary to both of you and kisses from miles away! WHAT MATTERS MOST..............nah! you know what i mean! the breeze will send you the message tonight!
so long as memories are fresh, death can't touch one...
Is it true what Carl says Lady Grace! ! ! ! I am sorry! ! ! ! But this one is filled with emotions... You said title was 'The Man'... I honestly didn't know what to expect.. And I found this one, very moving and touching.. Sort of romanitic too.. great one.. lovess Shan
This is a lovely and deeply touching poem on your late husband, Lady Grace, and a wonderful remembrance of your wedding day anniversary as well. I am certain your good husband loved you very much, and still deeply loves you today from his place in heaven. He brought you much happiness during his lifetime, and even today, thoughts of him still do. Carl.
every line is written from the heart. mark 10 shan