Monday, December 10, 2012

The Making Of The Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

The moon was born with Earth they say
Two vortex, large and small
Of gas and dusty nebula
And gravitation's pull
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Stevie Taite
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Kelvin Owusu 24 December 2012

YOU are an AMAZING TALENT that is all i will say for what i have read

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Saadat Tahir 19 December 2012

lovely.... :) did you write it to help your students grab the stuff. liked it cheers

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Kanav Justa 17 December 2012

I am pretty sure moon would be at cloud nine after reading this wonderful poem...

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Chandra Thiagarajan 14 December 2012

A creditable poem on the moon coupled with scientific facts is greatly alluring.! In this connection I wish you go through my poem-Moon Dream- for which I elicit your valued remarks, pl.

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Ruby Honeytip 14 December 2012

Yep....it's me again xx I love this poem...have I told you that? lol xxxxx

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Hans Vr 14 December 2012

Wow, Stevie, wonderful thoughts about the moon. That chunk of sandy desert, illuminating my nights Somethng magic, it has i love the way you think about it and the rhymes make it a pleasure to read.

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Lyn Paul 13 December 2012

This is excellent Stevie, true talent here. Thank you

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Valerie Dohren 12 December 2012

No eclipse going on here - brilliant write.

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R.k Das 11 December 2012

i think, , maximum number of poems must have been inspired by moon, , , the moon is feminine gender in england and masculine in india, , , , there moon is Queen Moon, , here in india Moon is Uncle Moon, , , and in this poem the poet has gone into the genesis of the creation of moon, , , , in astronomy, , , one more poem on moon, , and am jealous of the moon, , , hahahah, not kidding, , , , : (

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Red O'mara 11 December 2012

Ahh, lyrical science teachers. Where were youse when I was at school. Great idea nicely done.Some lovely rhymes

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Jahan Zeb 11 December 2012

After a long time I have read you and missed this one. Brilliant Stevie. What description! I love the way you developed it and love your selection of words. Factual with imaginary touch. Great

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Ruby Honeytip 10 December 2012

We love the long ones! !

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