I see the bluest ocean in my dreams with candy floss clouds
Floating by,
With angels flying, just stopping to bow
To The Maker Of The World, as he strides out with a dignified command,
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'My child all you need is to love, Look how the angels watch over you, Inside your heartbeat is a sign to step into the day, Without hate, fear, jealousy and vanity, just give a cheer! Amazing lines of a wonderful poem that mesmerizes the hearts and souls..................10
I am rolling of the floor laughing! ! ! I know where you are from. Candy Floss! A wonderful word we learning last Summer! BTW, nice write (you are pretty too!)
maker of the world how true a poem your writing comes from the heart live without wanting live without lies
what a poem, 'THE MAKER OF THE WORLD'. your poetries always inspires me to write better.your every thing in the poetries are right from the selection of words to the feel of poetry..well written and always be writing to inspire the poets like me.
If a poet were there in BC 12,000 and if there were these PH members like all of us, what would be there to thank this maker of the world, I am just wondering. Billions of years of burning and cooling processes and millions of years of fauna and flora emerging and re-emerging after perishing for a long spell were all the phases of this world. The beauty [if at all it exists in any form] in this planet is a poet`s solace and an optimist`s oasis of notions often contradicted. A million years from now this poem will remain as a beautiful piece of a poet`s imaginative flutter and the surviving organisms will not be able to be envious of its writer. Hazel, I am envious of you for reasons unknown and feelings purely enthralling our gregarious platform.
This is beautifully written, I like this poem 'The Maker Of The World smiles at me, Making my selfishness melt, '...
Beautifully written Hazel I always feel your heart in your words. This I love. Thank You
The truth is written across the heavens, As birds fly with the light of serenity, Across the ever changing skies! Brilliant lines. What God desire of us is honesty. Honesty of thoughts, beliefs and action.
Very Beautiful lines..... Life trembles like a raindrop on a leaf, Falling to the warm earth, Belief in The Maker Of The World, Will always give you a soft landing, Live without lies The truth is written across the heavens, Very true said in each lines.... I loved reading all the lines....This poem give a pleasant feeling to read. Thanks for this wonderful poem. Loved it.
An ever changing poem dropping from heavenly thought on the lap of leaf adoring the life to embrace love and beauty. Thank you so much for sharing and regards.
An ever changing poem dropping from heavenly thought on the lap of leaf adoring the life to embrace love and beauty. Thank you so much for sharing and regards.
An ever changing poem dropping from heavenly thought on the lap of leaf adoring the life to embrace love and beauty. Thank you so much for sharing and regards.
An ever changing poem dropping from heavenly thought on the lap of leaf adoring the life to embrace love and beauty. Thank you so much for sharing and regards.
An ever changing poem dropping from heavenly thought on the lap of leaf adoring the life to embrace love and beauty. Thank you so much for sharing and regards.
An ever changing poem dropping from heavenly thought on the lap of leaf adoring the life to embrace love and beauty. Thank you so much for sharing and regards.
An ever changing poem dropping from heavenly thought on the lap of leaf adoring the life to embrace love and beauty. Thank you so much for sharing and regards.
Look at life, look at love, to the each, to them the all. One special of, of the one whom is special. Looking down, instead you look up at the clouds... iip
This poem has been beautifully inscribed and the title has been properly justified. I appreciate it. Thanks for sharing.