The Magic Of Our Swing Comments

p.s. your Poet's Notes says: The Poem says it all. ...........well, not quite. how much did the swing cost, including shipping, handling, and tax? ? ? maybe we could just visit the park's playground.

gee, not only was the verse very soothing, but it was also Free! (verse) i'd have to live and be married to my mate for over 50 MORE years to make it to where you and your beloved have gotten yourselves! ! ! i'd kill myself first, unless my mate did me the service, which she is probably tempted to do! ! ! not tempted ALL THE TIME! (i hope) maybe what we need is a swing? ? maybe you could send it this way when you are finished using it? to MyPoemList, of course, even though it is a bit lovely-dovey for my taste. hee-hee. bri ;) some favorite lines: Sitting on the edge of night, we speak of those forgotten Times of youth, first loves, romance, our love and all the Intervening things that make up living................edge of night in two ways i think. and ..............................We speak volumes Of what might never have been said, as if there were a dawning On the smoldering gray ashes of our lives.