The Magic Of May Comments
May has arrived, the season of sunshine and rain
Bringing the magic of bright tints in its train
All around are fresh and fair flowers
Peeking out from the foliage and peeping from bowers
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Beautiful write you make it look so easy with the perfect rhythm and rhyme and delicious lines!
May is fast approaching and delightfully my most favourite time of year and sooo productive around home. I love your descriptive write reflecting the beauty and magic of May. :)
Dear May! Here is the best a poet can pay. Now be moderate, no heat strokes for the clay, not a burning day, your pleasant winds in the night, cloudy weather and the dim sunlight, that's what the humans, birds and animals need, for a lover there is one more greed, a fine mild rain in the noon, during night a starry sky and the moon.
Mother nature brings on May and you paint it as it is wonderfully with your words..everything flourishes so well and you capture it as you feel it in your heart...regards
Just as A leaf of grass is no less than the journey work of stars. so this poem is perennial.
It sings of Mother Nature so beautifully. Images and metaphors all sweet and tender like month of May. I feels me Wordworthian. I remember his poem 'A Night In June'.I love it, ma'am.
Magic of words reveals the beauty of May- Nice words brings nature nearer to heart
rich with words the lines flow like a sweet, gurgling stream taking me with it.deep ink.loved it.
May is such a lovely month. Its that bridge between winter and summer. A lovely delightful poem.
A joyful read about natures beauty in May. I loved that last verse and believe you came out with very coherent utterances- a poem that should lift one's spirit
You have woven a magic tapestry depicting the wonderful Nature in May at Kerala - -God's own country- The whole poem is a delight to read, particularly the last para 'is more so! ENJOYED, Valsa!
Here in India we are blessed because we can enjoy the seasons with our heart's content.A lovely poem on May.
A lovely poem. though in India its the Feb & march The spring but in west it is may A lovely season for the Rose dancing lines peeking and peeping strong feminine line indicates delicacy and softness tranquil bosom /Festering and panting for some coherent utterance! nice Valsa A divine providence through the eyes...enjoyable almost all the lines are interesting words cleverly chosen and made the poem soft and silky with its feminine nature
Gorgeous poem Valsa, so many lovely and descriptive lines, well worth a 10.
swan of love play with... ''Drunk in the loveliness of this season of delight And choked by an inexplicable ache, that is sweet Here I stand so dazed and distraught... beauty in words of love
This poem has made me a bit confused: being a power-failure, & load-shedding sufferer, i can't enjoy May; secondly, being the student (teacher) of literature, i can see the beauty of poetry, so many beautiful phrases and lines have come to this fine result... My Favorite lines: My sky is aflame in colours splendid and bright And I have spun the web of a dream, delicate and sweet Here I stand so dazed and distraught Festering and panting for some coherent utterance!
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8/7/2025 9:35:09 AM # 1.0.0
May has arrived, the season of sunshine and rain Bringing the magic of bright tints in its train All around are fresh and fair flowers Peeking out from the foliage and peeping from bowers....Brilliant beginning. The inscription on May is absolutely fascinating. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.