I feel, love in this world is like a dream
That at times threatens to be mighty true,
Rising higher from the humdrum like cream,
Disappearing then like a drop of dew;
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Liked the following lines that impart wisdom, to wit: " You need will and vision both ways to see And aught with its apparent conflict deal For, world.is both a myth and reality." Brilliant lines from a great poem.10+++++onto my Poem List
So very true. Love and life hold us spellbound. Their intricacies always caught us unaware. A beautifully crafted write full of wisdom.
Very nice poem on life and love.... well written. Love the last two lines: Life's all magic. Logic has not a clue: Seed's tree, flower's fruit, or two cells and you!
This world is just like dream and this dream gives amazing effect. Life rises higher and higher. Life is just like logical magic. This poem is very brilliantly and excellently penned.10
Excellent poem, nicely written.10+++ my fav lines: Rising higher from the humdrum like cream, Disappearing then like a drop of dew; Or at times feel, life is an onion peel
Thank you so much Mohammed Nehal for the feedback so liberally given.
Thank you Rose Maries for a twain of appreciating notes, quite uplifting the spirit.