Tuesday, April 22, 2008

The Magic Around Us Comments

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Hello the center of my life,
As the armada of desire sails away…… I see the passing of one more wish…..With each passing breath, comes back the time that we spent under the beauteous sun.
The cold rain that Engraved its memories on us…. Those nights of insatiable arguments.
I feel your love and care as you remember me generously……
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Shalini ashok
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UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 19 September 2022

Too pretentious and awkward presentation

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 December 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Shalini. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Richa Joshi 01 May 2008

nice poem..vags..i like the words, you have chosen. keep up the good work.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 27 April 2008

the mystery of life as when reflexes by the plexus of life ang living.................well penned, the stance of love yet croons in its luscious green,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 22 April 2008

well you do have a magic touch shalini..........

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