The Maestro Comments

as you are limited on time, i am also. i plan to get back to this one another day with comments/suggestions. it is a good effort and i've only read it once. not bad at all. one or two small corrections you might find with one more proofreading. nice rhyming. i almost always use rhyming couplets in my poems, but i do appreciate un-rhymed and 'here-and-there-rhymed' poems if they are good otherwise. it may take a while for me to get back to ya. yes, i figured some influence of Phantom of the Opera. He was so handsome! bri :) on to next 'new' poem. i esp. enjoyed mirror/clearer.

Hi Cryssa, Wonderful poem. After so many weeks, it is nice to see you back. With this exquisite piece. Loved reading: But my phantom with a broken voice, came to me without a choice. Together we have conquered fear, and now it's time to celebrate with a cheer. Very inspiring poem, cryssa. Obliged for sharing this one. A full 10+++