Wednesday, November 25, 2009

The Mad World..... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I want to live peacefully in this world
but this mad world never allows me to do so
When I wake up in the morning the sun doesn't arise
When I go to bed in the night the moon doesn't shine
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Ravi Sathasivam
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Anju Addanki 29 November 2009

The present world a good one

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Chitra - 27 November 2009

a thought provoking poem with pertinent issues of today's chaotic world

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Eyan Desir 26 November 2009

hahaha (^_^) you made me smile yes of course it is a mad world Only God can put it right Only God, Only God

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Seema Chowdhury 26 November 2009

very nice and thouight provoking poem. the words have lots of depth in them. i enjoyed reading them. take care

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Surya . 26 November 2009

a poem written with great thoughts and responsibilities. feelings expressed are genuine.thanx for sharing voted10 surya

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Omar Ibrahim 26 November 2009

yes it's mad for the good people....but very beautiful for the beasts.....i don't say one have to be a beast but i say you have to impress God and do what he wants to let him send you to the paradise...then you will say: (ahh i remember the world was mad..i thank you God for me being happy and glad) ....i loved this poem....of course 10 regards..

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Anjali Sinha 25 November 2009

The world is not mad its wonderful and awesome its the people who are mad and make things around us mad its how we think, and see that makes this world a mad place. Your poem is nice and introspective surely a tenner from me -10 anjali

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Merna Ibrahim 25 November 2009

Very meaningful and expressing poem...The world has a bright side and a dark side...but unfortunately, the dark side is increasing more and more..but we must persist and be patient and try to make the bright side bigger....And yes all the people are asking these questions everyday I agree with Shashendra...10+++

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Catrina Heart 25 November 2009

The world has many wonderful things to offer only the people doesn't make it good coz of greed where the devil's army succeed....meaningful poem shared! ! ! Great........

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Nikunj Sharma 25 November 2009

grief, pain, a bland world...full of sins...wars, treachry and all that a devil mind can think of.............Ravi this is a great poem, loaded with a deep meaning....keep it up

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