I want to live peacefully in this world
but this mad world never allows me to do so
When I wake up in the morning the sun doesn't arise
When I go to bed in the night the moon doesn't shine
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a thought provoking poem with pertinent issues of today's chaotic world
hahaha (^_^) you made me smile yes of course it is a mad world Only God can put it right Only God, Only God
very nice and thouight provoking poem. the words have lots of depth in them. i enjoyed reading them. take care
a poem written with great thoughts and responsibilities. feelings expressed are genuine.thanx for sharing voted10 surya
yes it's mad for the good people....but very beautiful for the beasts.....i don't say one have to be a beast but i say you have to impress God and do what he wants to let him send you to the paradise...then you will say: (ahh i remember the world was mad..i thank you God for me being happy and glad) ....i loved this poem....of course 10 regards..
The world is not mad its wonderful and awesome its the people who are mad and make things around us mad its how we think, and see that makes this world a mad place. Your poem is nice and introspective surely a tenner from me -10 anjali
Very meaningful and expressing poem...The world has a bright side and a dark side...but unfortunately, the dark side is increasing more and more..but we must persist and be patient and try to make the bright side bigger....And yes all the people are asking these questions everyday I agree with Shashendra...10+++
The world has many wonderful things to offer only the people doesn't make it good coz of greed where the devil's army succeed....meaningful poem shared! ! ! Great........
grief, pain, a bland world...full of sins...wars, treachry and all that a devil mind can think of.............Ravi this is a great poem, loaded with a deep meaning....keep it up
The present world a good one