Sunday, April 14, 2019

The Mad Blood! Comments

Rating: 5.0

The rays of sun, dash through me and burn
The hope to see an antelope in the clouds,
surviving the doubts
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Nayyab Younas Khan
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Konab Ghumman 16 April 2019

it's an amazing. weldone dear keep it up, . ON HIS WAY, THE ONE SAW A HORSE, IT HAD A WOUND CRUEL AND HARD SO HE HELPED IT TO STAND, HORSE SAW WITH AWE " THE ONE, IT'S GUARD" read my poems.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 April 2019

A manificent write, dear Ma'am Nayyab.....10+++++++++++

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Nimel Cama 14 April 2019

85 an hour! Seriously I don't know why more people haven't tried this, I work two shifts,2 hours in the day and 2 in the evening…And whats awesome is Im working from home so I get more time with my kids. Heres where I went, ℂashverity.cℴℳ

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 April 2019

Dear Poetess! Who does not serve the human, is forced to serve the animal. Thanks for remembering.

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