Sunday, December 17, 2017

The Mélange Comments

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They were all talking
They were all joking
Together for they were all friends
Since a long time seemed since childhood
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Susan Williams 20 December 2017

Now being alive you should be a fool At your own good fortune to grumble - - - - - - - - - - - Very good poem and these two lines grabbed my attention and wouldn't let go. If we're here to still grumble, than we should be in the midst of thanksgiving rather than grumbling- -we're still alive, there's still chances to change what is making us upset. Thank you for all the points you made in this well-done poem.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 21 December 2017

Many many thanks.........Susan..........I am humbled

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