Monday, August 31, 2020

The Lyrics Of The Life, Incomplete. Comments

Rating: 4.6

Who wrote the script?
Who fashioned everything like this?

The sea with waves
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M. Asim Nehal
COMMENTS
Deepak S S 07 September 2020

Very well conceived and presented. enjoyed reading it

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Michael Jack 03 September 2020

Yes song of the life is always unsung and lyrics will remain incomplete.

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S H 02 September 2020

Awesome poem. Nicely written

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Rajnish Manga 01 September 2020

An amazing poem with a philosophical complexion. The queries are quite legitimate and are in public domain for ages without a plausible answer. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks, Asim ji.

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 September 2020

When the life is on track Why love drifts it away? When love is blooming Why heart breaks it away? ......great write; life is life; always incomplete; if someone thinks that after getting this, this and this s/he will be settled but this is an illusion; a mirage, a superb glittered fascination hankers after this life; this life never can complete everything; it runs to catch the blooming flower but in reaching that will be withered; the lyric of this won't be complete....

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Kezia Kezia 01 September 2020

Beautiful lines...thanks for sharing

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 August 2020

Life's journey! ! ! With sensitive moods along the line. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 31 August 2020

The song of life is unsung.......fabulous write......thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.

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Kostas Lagos 31 August 2020

A song incomplete, a poem perfect!

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Varsha M 31 August 2020

There is no answer to this question but patience overrules to bring best always. Beautiful words.

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Sharad Bhatia 31 August 2020

Really appreciable poetry about " Life and invisible God. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem 100++

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