Saturday, November 17, 2012

The Lying Photo Comments

Rating: 5.0

They cuddle, yes they nestle,
Dressed so finely, photo smiles.
There's a gap twixt mum with children,
Not just inches - more like miles.
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Joe Hughes
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 November 2012

An ars poetica view on a portrait! Wondrous n interestin in flow n content. Where poetry takes us!

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Stevie Taite 19 November 2012

Poor broken families. Let her down so! ! A sad poem, but I hear stories like the tale in this poem all the time. A poem that fills my head with images so clearly. Clever writing my friend

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Valerie Dohren 19 November 2012

Poor mum, suffering from the bends - thought you got that from deep sea diving. Interesting and unusual write.

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