Wednesday, April 6, 2016

The Lust For Life (The Saga Of My Sati-4) Comments

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In a moment
You precipitated
Into a droplet of tear
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D Priyanka Singh 06 December 2017

Along the path of strangeness, Down the lane of memory. Around the orbit of My love for your unborn- Desires and dreams, and Lust for life. Beautiful verse. Loved the lines. Thanks Sir for this poem. 10+++++ for it. DP

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D Priyanka Singh 06 December 2017

Along the path of strangeness, Down the lane of memory. Around the orbit of My love for your unborn- Desires and dreams, and Lust for life. Beautiful verse. Loved the lines. Thanks Sir for this poem. 10+++++ for it.

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D Priyanka Singh 06 December 2017

Along the path of strangeness, Down the lane of memory. Around the orbit of My love for your unborn- Desires and dreams, and Lust for life. Beautiful verse. Loved the lines. Thanks Sir for this poem.

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Anita Aparajita Das 07 June 2016

Along the path of strangeness, Down the lane of memory. Around the orbit of My love for your unborn- Desires and dreams, and Lust for life. Good poem. Enjoyed it.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 13 May 2016

In a momentYou precipitatedInto a droplet of tearIn the eyes, in questOf your foot prints, Along the path of strangeness, Down the lane of memory... Beautiful, the droplets of tear symbolize a lot of new feelings. Thanks for the poem Sir. Full marks. Seema

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Sourav Banerjee 04 May 2016

In a moment You precipitated Into a droplet of tear In the eyes, in quest Of your foot prints, Along the path of strangeness, Down the lane of memory. Around the orbit of My love for your unborn- Desires and dreams, and Lust for life. Beautiful verse. Loved the lines.10 for it.

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