Saturday, October 24, 2009

The Lure Of Lucre Comments

Rating: 5.0

Money they say
Entices almost everyone
Especially those who believe
That unless they have it in plenty
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Sandra Martyres
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You put what is happening so wisely in this perceptive poem of yours Sandra. The 'getting' destroys the family 'giving'. Without time and love families cannot thrive. In this throw away society, love gets thrown away too readily too! Top marks! love Karin

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rago rago 26 October 2009

money matters.............and swindle, roll, life, family all in all.........perception of money differs.......your bringing out the concept is beautiful.......

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Carl Harris 25 October 2009

As your fine poem quite aptly states, Sandra, it is nice to be wealthy but with that wealth comes changes which are not always pleasant or acceptable to friends and relatives. The abundance of money certainly changes most people, gives them a totally different perspective on life, and that is very well stated in this excellent poem. Carl.

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Sonya Florentino 25 October 2009

the people who live for money should stop and ask themselves...what am I earning this money for? what do I really want to get from it? and am I getting it? ....greed is an addiction...if they don't know the answer yet, they're still in denial....

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Kesav Easwaran 25 October 2009

you either always earn or lose...money or your dear ones' happiness...nice theme Sandra...and very well presented...thanks...10

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Fay Slimm 24 October 2009

Materialism seems a disease of the age Sandra - -a strongly written piece advising anyone to think twice before taking that road - - I agree wholeheartedly with the verse.......10 + + + Fay

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 24 October 2009

sandra...you have brought outa very good subject...we did start with material to material..and now hoarding with excess money...if the swiss bank has 3 times our countries liability as its deposit...how can we call our country a poor country..man has to consciously question money's importance

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David Harris 24 October 2009

Sandra, you are so right about the lure money can bring. In the end it becomes a god to them and nothing else matters and so easily forgotten are the good times, good friends and happy family they had before it came along. A really great write my friend. Top marks plus and thank you for sharing it with us. Hugs David

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Meggie Gultiano 24 October 2009

When there was less lucre But more time and affection For sharing with one and all ...................... this is more important than money

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Patti Masterman 24 October 2009

People think it would be so lovely to be rich; they don't realize it brings a lot of responsibilities, and that the money owns you and it tells you how to spend much of your time; and attracts deadly leeches sometimes. Thanks for telling it like it is.

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Indira Renganathan 24 October 2009

When they just stop living And focus only on earning Never mind if it is ill-gotten Leaving them no time or energy For their folks back home. The families feel the change And begin to yearn For the days long gone When there was less lucre But more time and affection For sharing with one and all.....very rightly said....superb text...kindly read my money poems at leisure Sandra.....yours is a poem of importance.....thank you

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