Thursday, April 4, 2013

The Lullaby Comments

Rating: 3.5

The lights go out - I'm all alone
I spent the night on my own
Soaked in tears I sink like a stone
Unnamed feelings never let me go
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Sameera Alshaikh
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Evance Ombaka 25 July 2013

Love the simplicity & touch in this...good work I hope the dark of night will soon be gone As by dawn when the Golden lights turn on.

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Free Bird 10 May 2013

GREATT poem written by u :) 10** for this.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 26 April 2013

I read some of your poems some what there is a touch, touch of spiritualism meaning full Thank for sharing, thanks to poem hunter...Motley of thought, words paintings on the canvas of minds.............

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Oladehinde J Ibikunle 21 April 2013

I applaud this! This is short and precise. Most of your poems are dark just like mine too.

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Subbaraman N V 13 April 2013

Most important part of a man's life is night which I enjoy every minute in sleep! Cheer up and be happy!

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David Wood 13 April 2013

A lovely poem but sad. I hope you cheer up soon.

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Nadia Abduljabbar 04 April 2013

v. beautiful but sad poem. Cheerr up baby. life is beautiful esp. in ur age

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