Wednesday, May 6, 2020

The Low Points Of Lockdown: (May,2020) Comments

Rating: 5.0

A million trivial things are sapping
My substance. They are tainting my dreaming.
I'd like to compose an ode to the moon
And stars, butmy powers are weakening.
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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 May 2020

A well conveyed message in poetic expression.....10+++

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Dominic Windram 06 May 2020

Thanks Bernard...I attempted a slightly different rhyme scheme here.

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