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The Loving Girl Comments

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A girl i saw in my dream,
Black long hair she has, like a queen.
The eyes of the girl is black,
Mountain is the place she love.
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Md. Naeem Aziz
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Terence Craddock 27 April 2023

I wrote the poem 'Words That Enrich Create Better Lives A Better World', inspired by a comment I made on the poem 'The Loving Girl', by the poet Md. Naeem Aziz and dedicated to Md. Naeem Aziz.

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Terence Craddock 07 April 2023

the girl seen in a dream, with long black hair like a queen, is the spirit of the mountain the sea the moon, that wants to adventure travel the world like a bird

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Terence Craddock 12 April 2023

I wrote the poem 'The Girl Travels To Time Far Distance Places', inspired by the poem 'The Loving Girl', by the poet Md. Naeem Aziz and dedicated to Md. Naeem Aziz.

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Terence Craddock 20 January 2024

The poem 'It Is A Joy To Write A Poem', is the original poem I wrote inspired by a comment I made on the poem 'The Loving Girl', by the poet Md. Naeem Aziz and dedicated to Md. Naeem Aziz.

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Terence Craddock 20 January 2024

The poem 'The Girl Seen In A Dream' is the original poem I wrote inspired by this comment I made on the poem 'The Loving Girl', by the poet Md. Naeem Aziz and dedicated to Md. Naeem Aziz.

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Pallavi Tripathi 07 April 2023

You kept the mystery going by never revealing whether you actually got her or not

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 06 March 2023

The girl of your dream, your heart. Nice write. Much expressive

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