And the air
solidified around us
encased us as if we were
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You sure do come with some of the most unique ways of exploring a love poem! An examination by the darkness whilst stranded in a fog...I don't know where you get them from! I love the whole atmospherics and how that ordinary walk is transformed into this beautiful poem. Only you I think could see it like that and now that you have wrote it and I have read...I now see it like that! You have a way of stretching my vision and compelling me to see as you see! Wonderfull! love GinaXXX
excellence donall! loadsa beautiful lines. great story!