Sunday, October 28, 2007

The Lovers Make Their Way Home Comments

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And the air
solidified around us

encased us as if we were
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Dónall Dempsey
fog
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alice sunderland 29 October 2007

excellence donall! loadsa beautiful lines. great story!

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Gina Pisapia 28 October 2007

You sure do come with some of the most unique ways of exploring a love poem! An examination by the darkness whilst stranded in a fog...I don't know where you get them from! I love the whole atmospherics and how that ordinary walk is transformed into this beautiful poem. Only you I think could see it like that and now that you have wrote it and I have read...I now see it like that! You have a way of stretching my vision and compelling me to see as you see! Wonderfull! love GinaXXX

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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