In religion,
in pain,
in beauty,
in the ecstasy
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Yea, very well expressed, the openness and simplicity with which you write the poem is something unique, and I like it very much.
Your expression of God on a scale of love, pain, living, natural and supernatural is sublime! What else can I say? To place His existence, magnifying Him brilliantly in just a few lines, is itself an art called Poetry. I like the fact that you stick to your distinct ideas with a style of your own.
and in many other things that the Consciousness perceive, .......yes, it is. Very nicely expressed, beautiful poem.
A journey of conscience through the soulful aspects of life to realize the truth. Wonderful concept. I'm enriched.
the lover of God recognizes at any rate the fringe of the Real. beautiful and powerful