Monday, October 16, 2017

The Lover Comments

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If I saw you just once a week
I would love you for the rest of my life,
if I saw you twice a week
I would love you for half of my life,
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Gianfranco Aurilio
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Mahtab Bangalee 04 March 2020

there love weaves the strong pillar of loving palace///very nice poem penned

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Lodigiana Poetess 17 October 2017

I kind of love the idea of this- very quirky but great!

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Gianfranco Aurilio 17 October 2017

Thank you. My collection Menu of love explains this concept more exhaustively.

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Susan Lacovara 16 October 2017

What an interesting concept. You have penned a new point of view. Excellent poem.

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Gianfranco Aurilio 16 October 2017

Thank you very much, Susan.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 October 2017

Having love for rest of life is assured and this promise is given instantly here. This is brilliantly penned beautiful poem shared here...10

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Gianfranco Aurilio 16 October 2017

Thank you so much, Kumarmani.

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Gianfranco Aurilio 16 October 2017

Thank you, Kumarmani. I wanted to add very much, but, strangely, this site doesn't allow it, because you cannot duplicate... (?)

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