The loveliest poem I ever wrote
was with almost a dozen couplets
my fingers sang, when they met yours -
the glimmer in your eyes said it all.
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your poetry, truly sensual, the touch of love, the bloom of romance, words that reveal, the soul of the lover, to his beloved....
Lovely poem, but you still can write more lovely poems keep writing..
a great introspection..substantial of a poet creativeness of verses..well penned...
Very sensual and romantic, but open and true. Amazing phrasing, great use of the elements.
Its really sweet and romantic.I liked the layout of the poem too, the way it is structured. The repetition is good. On a whole lovely lines.
a lovely poem...sacred and sensual like love and life
wow..............this is soooooooooo beautiful...tender and filled with love
a lovely poem...it forced me to just look into my heart and feel the way you expressed...awesome...i will give 10+ for this thanks
i think that your poems are very gracefull and down to heart and in away they are all link together sort of but i think they are good and keep writing
A tender and loving poem, filled with wonderful sentiments. A few small typos, otherwise nicely written. Linda
ha ha...this is poetry! ! it has rhyme, a rhythm, beauty and wisdom.... great! ! perfect 10