Friday, January 2, 2009

! ! ! The Love Today! ! ! Comments

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The love today,
is it what we try to find?
Does the world force us to fight?
Does it feel right
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Rachel Butler 21 September 2009

'there's no more love than what we believe in...' Rachel Ann Butler

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Reihaneh Jalalian 15 January 2009

kite it was wonderful, i loved it so much. i love your feelings. it was beautiful. well done

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David E. Patton 14 January 2009

This is a wonderfull poem, well writen and heart felt David

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Fiona Davidson 14 January 2009

Excellent strong write...Fi

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 13 January 2009

that was so much of honesty... and hoping and praying the world can be a better place to live in...! ! ! : D

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This is a great poem written very well with honestly great piece Krista

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Amanda Seltrecht 09 January 2009

I really like this poem... I think that we all want to be loved in a certain way and as much as one may hate to admit it, it is the truth. Often times we are left with wondering wether or not someone will love us for who we really are. Remember that 'forever' is nothing more than just a word. I also think that to love is to live, and to live is to love.

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Anjali Sinha 09 January 2009

nicely penned--anjali

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amusing... yes, where's the love now in this kaleidoscopic world of ours... like it thanks for sharing

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Vaibhav Pandey 07 January 2009

very thoughtful and touching....... loved it. 10

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Subbaraman N V 03 January 2009

Yes, the world needs it very badly today! A nice write!

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<font color =fusha>Amy 02 January 2009

i liked it especially the repetetiveness of the first line nice write

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Joseph Poewhit 02 January 2009

Very much in the Bible whats happening

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