Saturday, October 11, 2008

The Love Story Comments

Rating: 5.0

The trees were bare, the ground was white,
The sky had an eerie grey-blue light.
The fields were empty, clean and pure,
Winter waited for the sun to shine once more.
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Naomi Abrams
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Very tragic.Sad events it always seems that when we soar with happiness someone or something has to burst our balloon.

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A Thousand Splendid Suns - 11 October 2008

Happiness always costs a price...Great poem.. :)

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Ency Bearis 11 October 2008

a great poem, touching..well delivered theme..excellent write... Ency bearis

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Stephanie Dower 11 October 2008

Such a sad story, very powerful. I love it.

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Hi Naomi nice poem, its so true that love often ends in tragedy and u portrayedit with alot of feeling and colour, nice poem :)

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