Monday, May 3, 2010

The Love Story Continues Comments

Rating: 4.5

I have a Relationship.
I fight
with Arrows of Blame,
with Stings of Criticism,
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Amrit Rathi
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Emma Adamyan 08 June 2010

quite and smart lines and... the love story continues..

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Tomy Pop 26 May 2010

very great contrasts of a good and a bad relationship. thank you for sharing.

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Preetam Shetty 13 May 2010

Love continues....love is eternity

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Indira Babbellapati 10 May 2010

o, yeah...it has to continue...

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C. P. Sharma 08 May 2010

Beautiful thought provoking poem. Life swings between love and hate. The choice is ours. Thanks for sharing. CP

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Valery Atkinson 08 May 2010

[The Relationship. It depends How I approach it. It depends What I make Out of it..] Well said.....What a contrast! One way we can make the realtionship Hell, otherway, it's all the way a Love Story. A poem with Great Insight!

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Sachin Danehalli 08 May 2010

nice way to connect the past and present..Love changes all..Nice poem: -)

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Mukul Chaudhari 05 May 2010

For the Self-centered Ends The paradox which this line holds is very subtle. Very nice.

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Anjali Sinha 04 May 2010

wowwwwwwwww nice-a right approach to life good poem --

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