Tuesday, July 18, 2017

The Love, Poetry & Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

I used to write poetry ones,
Those days were very sweet
As buns, and I love it
To rhyme with time,
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Karnika Yashwant
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Jazib Kamalvi 19 July 2017

A great start with a love poem. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 July 2017

My poetry days were very sweet.. Serene Time, rain, beauty, love of life, adding purpose and direction to life. very nice poem. thank you dear poet. tony

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Doris Cornago 18 July 2017

Like the star Trail mime, Serene Time, What a Sweet dear Playful Rhyme, Every drop of the rain, That is the engineering technique you taught me, a scaffolding of images.

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Doris Cornago 18 July 2017

It's the Internet folks, I'm not nagging him but got impatient when I can't see what I have written. :)

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Doris Cornago 18 July 2017

Your poetry has a rise and swelling to it which is not affected by the structure. I like the innovation that you've introduced to the structure. I learned a new technique from you. Thank you. :)

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Doris Cornago 18 July 2017

I like this part best: I know why life is more Than just dime and crime, its love That adds purpose to the touch and time.

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Doris Cornago 18 July 2017

This is awesome. I know that once a poet, always a poet. Skills never fade with time but waits, percolating.

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Doris Cornago 18 July 2017

This is awesome. I know that once a poet, always a poet. Skills never fade with time but wait, percolating. :)

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Doris Cornago 18 July 2017

This is awesome. I know that once a poet, always a poet. Skills never fade with time but waits, percolating. :)

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