Saturday, October 10, 2009

The Love Of My Life Comments

Rating: 3.9

Dark at night you never leave my sight.
The dark is my fear but you make it all clear.
Waves flow I always drown, but you alway come around.
As I start to fight i lose my sight.
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Dhear Vongjalorn
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~*Random Nightmare*~ 15 October 2009

Wow. This is a wonderful poem. It's soo cute! Your so lucky that you've founf the love of your life! When I think I've got that, They always leave, So I don't really fall for that much when it's me. But you've got a talent! I love the rhyming! It's cute! 11 too. That's just wonderful! Well, you keep writing and the best of luck with zack!

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whoa. eleven and already writing soo deeply. until i was like twelve i just always supressed those things and kept it bottled up and now i let it flow with my poetry which is what you seem to have done here. nice rhyming, not forced or tacky either! ! ! ! ! i can't belive you got sooo lucky as to have found ur 'true love' so early tho. best of luck with zack! ! ! !

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Wow, being 11 and finding the love of your life must be wonderful. I didn't even ''like'' boys until I was 13 and I certainly don't plan on meeting my soul mate or anything anytime soon. Lovely poem!

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Milica Franchi De Luri 11 October 2009

Another good poem. You have a lot of incite, being only 11.

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Shelly Shelly 10 October 2009

an incredible writing....about someone really spcl in ur life..have connected the presence very nicely...10 again

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