Wednesday, August 6, 2008

The Love Of My Heart Comments

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I have spread my dreams under
your feet, tread softly because
you tread on my dreams.
I draw life from you just by mere
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Kholekile Monakali
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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 03 September 2008

I like the way you write when love is concern.You are really a very good lover for a boy of your age.I envy the girl you love.Fantastically romantic and passionate! Keep up the great job!

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Ashley Helebe 02 September 2008

ayo bro you are realy good i cant even explain man i thought i was cool but you are good in them words

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Asia Joseph 13 August 2008

that is great, please do the same.

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Ellen Frawley 12 August 2008

i like this one especailly in love if you love some one truely and trust them fully and really let them in to your life you look for nothing from them but share everything with them and stand the chance off being hurt and your dreams broken

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Ency Bearis 06 August 2008

love should be love by love...great write...nice thoughts.... Best Wishes, Ency Bearis

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