Wednesday, March 28, 2007

The Love Motel Comments

Rating: 5.0

think I've lost faith...
There is no such thing as love
No such thing as the perfect man
Just a bitter-sweet torture
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Michelle Tiddy
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Marci Made 29 March 2007

Ems, I'm here dear.....I think I'll leave it with what David has said right below me, in fact what all have said here.....love you em...........HUGS, marci....

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David Taylor 28 March 2007

Dear Michelle, I will agree no perfect man to see. But as for love...........if not tainted by desire then love is pure and free. Dont throw out the love because of him, or you, or anything, it's love that's true not he.

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David Harris 28 March 2007

Michelle, we are in a very sad and poignant mood this morning. Never admit defeat, stand tall and strong what ever the situation. Another brilliant write with sad emotion pouring out from every line. Top marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. Take comfort in your friends, that is what they are there for. David

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Never feel or admit defeat. Only announce rejection. You did it well, despite the thinness of the line. Good choice of word 'motel' - suggests an appropriate slight tackiness, lack of meaning, transience. t x

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Michelle Tiddy

Michelle Tiddy

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