Saturday, February 13, 2016

The Love Letter Comments

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I long to write a love letter,
Cupid's counsel stands ready to dictate,
I raise my pen, the page agrees
To accept the words, yet I hesitate
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Lora Colon
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Jak Black 23 February 2016

I like this poem, Lora. It tells the reader who you really are, written with your heart on your sleeve. A loving relationship is what the vast majority of us aspire to. I think the reassurance of knowing that we are loved and valued is an inherent need in all of us. This poem tells me that you have boundless love to offer and it hurts you that you have no-one to share this special quality with.

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Brian Johnston 21 February 2016

Well pardon me if I disagree Lora, Message sent is message received even if it is in a diary that is never seen by anyone but you in your imagination. Though we all seek messages of reassurance that someone gets it, values our love, and is intact standing by our side, vanity, all is vanity. If you do not wish to see that you are loved, or try to mount loves head upon the wall like a trophy, you can truly live in disappointment. And of course it is true that a trophy hanging on a wall is devoid of life. Always wishing you the best of everything!

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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