When I first looked into your eyes you swept me off my feet.
Whenever I was by your side it made me feel complete.
The first time that I saw you smile the world felt so surreal,
And when your held my hand in your my heart learned how to feel.
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Touching poem. Lots of people have been in this dark valley but have climbed the hill and found new love...it's there if you look...
Mariann I am so touched with this very touching and sad poem you wrote...I wish you were not in those situation and it is true that many married couples said that they are not perfect match because they let go their true love...It is God's will and it is not our decision....to decide who is our perfect match or married couples...Well done for a very sad and sobering poem..
i can relate to this poem so much...especially now that i am in the same situation right now... letting someone that you love so much is so difficult to do, but sometimes you just have to do it in order to be together in the end.... great poem :) kay
I FOUND THIS TRITE AND TRIVIAL AND AN EXCUSE FOR WORDS TO RHYME WHICH OBSCURED THE SENTIMENT AND TRUE MEANING