Friday, March 4, 2016

The Love I Felt Comments

Rating: 4.8

As I looka around
I feel alone
Feeling six feet underground
Cold as stone
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Victoria Hudson
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Connor Whyte 14 March 2016

I am sorry you feel so alone no one should ever have to feel that way but sometimes being alone opens opportunities you have not seen since someone was around find the beauty in yourself and you will see you are never alone. Strong words don't give up you got talent.

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 March 2016

My love My life My pain My strife All gone once you came You stol my heart You can do it again Do it for my part. A great love poem. please write more and publish.. write down your feelings and emotions and write and rewrite in a poetic way. thank you for this passionate poem tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 March 2016

Love and pain! ! Very common in life. Be strong and move on. Thanks for sharing.

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