Monday, January 18, 2016

The Love Blues Comments

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Why did you invoke that greed in me
why did you have to feed that love in me,

The morning sunshines, the evening walks
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Randhir Kaur 06 March 2016

Quite vivid..A lasting impact..Love is really louder than the pressure to be perfect..Nicely penned Kavya..

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Kavya . 14 March 2016

Thanks so much Sir for your lovely comment.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 February 2016

Debates! ! But, true love is superior! Nice work.

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Kavya . 18 February 2016

Thanks so much Edward Kofi Louis

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Mithilesh Yadav 09 February 2016

Am longing to get those moments back yes am greedy, I want them all intact I shall wait, will not allow our memories to rust Will you hold my hand once before I crumble to dust! these is grrt poem indeed ..... what a pen

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Kavya . 10 February 2016

Thanx a lot for liking and commenting on this poem

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Valsa George 19 January 2016

Memories never fade. Your longing to get back to those times of euphoric togetherness finds deep expression in your poem! Enjoyed reading this emotionally charged poem!

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Kavya . 19 January 2016

Thank you Mam. Yes memories never fade though the person prefers to fade away from our lives.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 18 January 2016

Yes memories that are sweet never get fade ever bcoz every time we used to recall those memories again and again...nice poem....thank u for sharing :)

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Kavya . 18 January 2016

Yes you are right Abhilasha. thank you for your comments

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