The Love Between Mars And Snake Comments

I read this poem few times as i a bit confuse with the snake and then how it became a star....but then i get my head clear and i understand what it about, Mars love stars...a far distance, the love universe so shiny in dark space...It really a good poem, but do u know in mars there are martians...maybe they can steal your red stone away and bring it to saturn (The place where captain cur lived once) hahhahhaa joking...keep wrting good poetry! _Unwritten Soul

Great honest poem! I loved the rhyme between tinker and stinker. Those words were funny but true!