Monday, February 10, 2014

The Love Affair Comments

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I sat in my room, cold and bleak,
The light within grew grey and weak.
I stood to open the door, just a peek,
And I had a love affair.
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Fiona Schwartzinoff
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Prodip Kumar Basak 24 November 2014

An excellent expression of heart. I like it too much.

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love is a spot of sunlight on the wall A brief glow of warmth round and small And so fleeting that before you really fall It is done and over and alas long gone......... Good write.....Keep your pen busy

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