The Lottery Comments

should read this at a casino very interesting for gamblers

Indeed so that you feel in ball-to-ball type… ‘hoping to spot the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow’...ya subtle imagery Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

Through their mind’s eye, patiently they stood gazing to the sky, peering through the floating cloud, hoping to spot the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow......this is how the human mentality works on easy money..person thinks of getting it to solve all related problems of life...lovely poem sentimentally interwoven........10 read mine.....o.mother////anywhere

This has a special quality of describing things in a way that you feel that you are there.

I agree with Leslie.it is a great message.Well written.Keep it up.

wonderful message you placed her. this is my kind of poetry.