Friday, December 5, 2008

The Lost World Comments

Rating: 5.0

Where is that earth
which was full of wealth,
far away from the dearth! ! !
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Vaibhav Pandey
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Ritty Patnaik 27 January 2010

longing for a beautiful clean world comes through very strong., though we realise that we have destroyed nature the wellspring of creation, it is too late.your thoughts are beautiful vaibhav!

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Gold Fish 16 October 2009

Partially, it still exists in isolated areas, and we should attempt to preserve the natural beauties that remain, so that future generations can appreciate them long after they are gone. The industrial revolution had a detrimental effect on many aspects of nature. Progress at the cost of nature; for seldom is anything truly free, and typically someone has to pay one way or the other. A Lost World, indeed. Thanks for sharing. Vivid and Contemplating. 10+

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Sandra Martyres 03 May 2009

A brilliant piece with atouch of philosophy Vaibhav...10+

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 28 April 2009

what more can i say? only amazing! ! ! brilliantly done!

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Mark R Slaughter 18 March 2009

Another good thought-provoking work. At it begs the question 'will it ever be found? ' Mark

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Catrina Heart 16 February 2009

A poem written in a very heartfelt way....Great poem here...Thanks! 10

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 08 February 2009

A true regret coming from a genuine heart in a skillful way. shanmugam

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 07 February 2009

A modern day Paradise Lost, perhaps? ! ...I like this, Vaibhav....you promote reader participation, by your queries...yo set that tone from the start...and build it to an impactive climax...Well done, my friend, as always! P.S...Hey, lets kick-it-up some....i want to see you on a 2nd page of poems before the end of February! F j R 2009

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Miriam Maia Padua 22 January 2009

very beautiful write.... mother earth is happy you show great concern on nature. through this very fine piece...an awakening.... we have to find and bring back again THE LOST WORLD for this generation and the next generations.... thanks for making this...10++++

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Dark Gurl 55 20 January 2009

pretty amaaaaazing.. hope we get our world back, , lol it's incredible i like it..

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C T Heart 05 January 2009

Excellent poetic prose. Questions arising from the heart for you care so much about the world we live in...You have pricked your readers collective conscience and emphasized moral obligation as they answer in their mind your beautiful queries...Question marks are far better to use than exclamation points, for you started your stanzas with a question. Or rather use both? ! to give more emphasis and energy.10++++

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John Weber 30 December 2008

Deep questions of healing and harm abound within this piece. I appreciate the passion of your words here, Vaibhav; there not a shrug of complacency to be found without doubt. As a society, we face an arduous task of rebuilding the relations of humanity by seizing the reigns away from the global bankers set on enslaving us all. Look forward to more of your pondering, my friend! Warm regards, John.

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Sebastine Humaemo 23 December 2008

beautiful.............perfect rhyme......thanks for sharing.........sebastine.......

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Autumn Stoddard 23 December 2008

Wonderful, you showed the concept well.

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Tulsi Hanumanthu 20 December 2008

The weighty thoughts embedded in this poem perhaps outweigh your age. I am sure there is a bright future in store for you.

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Chitra - 18 December 2008

truly from the heart and a very thoughful poem

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C. P. Sharma 16 December 2008

well done, a good and timely reminder. Vaibhav, it needs a few final touches. CP

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Linda Moore 15 December 2008

Yes, Yes we want it back. really good......10

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Tom Golding 14 December 2008

Excellant. Very well done.

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Anthony Dover 14 December 2008

Stolen by man's greed.Still I believe it still exists in our hearts.

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