Where is that earth
which was full of wealth,
far away from the dearth! ! !
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Partially, it still exists in isolated areas, and we should attempt to preserve the natural beauties that remain, so that future generations can appreciate them long after they are gone. The industrial revolution had a detrimental effect on many aspects of nature. Progress at the cost of nature; for seldom is anything truly free, and typically someone has to pay one way or the other. A Lost World, indeed. Thanks for sharing. Vivid and Contemplating. 10+
what more can i say? only amazing! ! ! brilliantly done!
Another good thought-provoking work. At it begs the question 'will it ever be found? ' Mark
A poem written in a very heartfelt way....Great poem here...Thanks! 10
A true regret coming from a genuine heart in a skillful way. shanmugam
A modern day Paradise Lost, perhaps? ! ...I like this, Vaibhav....you promote reader participation, by your queries...yo set that tone from the start...and build it to an impactive climax...Well done, my friend, as always! P.S...Hey, lets kick-it-up some....i want to see you on a 2nd page of poems before the end of February! F j R 2009
very beautiful write.... mother earth is happy you show great concern on nature. through this very fine piece...an awakening.... we have to find and bring back again THE LOST WORLD for this generation and the next generations.... thanks for making this...10++++
pretty amaaaaazing.. hope we get our world back, , lol it's incredible i like it..
Excellent poetic prose. Questions arising from the heart for you care so much about the world we live in...You have pricked your readers collective conscience and emphasized moral obligation as they answer in their mind your beautiful queries...Question marks are far better to use than exclamation points, for you started your stanzas with a question. Or rather use both? ! to give more emphasis and energy.10++++
Deep questions of healing and harm abound within this piece. I appreciate the passion of your words here, Vaibhav; there not a shrug of complacency to be found without doubt. As a society, we face an arduous task of rebuilding the relations of humanity by seizing the reigns away from the global bankers set on enslaving us all. Look forward to more of your pondering, my friend! Warm regards, John.
beautiful.............perfect rhyme......thanks for sharing.........sebastine.......
The weighty thoughts embedded in this poem perhaps outweigh your age. I am sure there is a bright future in store for you.
well done, a good and timely reminder. Vaibhav, it needs a few final touches. CP
Stolen by man's greed.Still I believe it still exists in our hearts.
longing for a beautiful clean world comes through very strong., though we realise that we have destroyed nature the wellspring of creation, it is too late.your thoughts are beautiful vaibhav!