Monday, September 28, 2015

The Lost Wish! ! Comments

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A little child, her daughter's age,
came to her mind in her last bed,
she was very frightened and shivered,
for she asked her niece to look,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 28 September 2015

The persona, depicted in this poem is a real person who is in the last stretch of her life and she mentioned to her loved ones that she wanted to seek forgiveness from her niece who was under her care for the actions she assumed that was wrong, before she has gone into coma. When I see both the aunt and the niece together in the hospital, this poem erupts in my mind. We are responsible for our actions irrespective of good and bad and we may one day do the same, but the action mentioned here es only “just asked the niece to babysit”

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 29 September 2015

she passed away peacefully on 29th September 2015,

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