Tuesday, February 11, 2014

The Lost Spring Comments

Rating: 4.8

This day you left me
And spring lost its flower forever
At early spring, young called never
Again in a low silent day,
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A B Faniki 09 August 2019

Intresting piece. Things can loss their glow when things we desire flee. Thanks for shating

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 21 November 2017

Sad to hear that but lost is lost find autumn

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Howard Savage 31 January 2016

eu the spring you'll lost the beginning. Great metaphor.

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Bharati Nayak 19 September 2015

The poem is really mesmerising! !

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Daniel Brick 25 July 2014

This poem is a lovely evocation of the spring season, both for its beauty and for its memories. You use of colors is remarkable - I especially like the purple - it makes spring not only a riot of growing things but also an explosion of colors after the dullness of winter. You wrote of your appreciation of my spring poem and now I can express my appreciation of yours. We may live thousands of miles apart but poetry and spring create a unity in our two minds.

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Md Elias Uddin 20 February 2014

Melts with a dream after a long winter washed nice idea.

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Md Asadullah 16 February 2014

Thanks for sharing your beautiful poem, I enjoyed reading it :)

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Hazel Durham 16 February 2014

I'm lost for words, I love this work of supreme beauty, so delicate with lines that leave a trail of the comfort of hope! Thank you so much for sharing.

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Patricia Grantham 15 February 2014

A beautiful poem written just in time for Valentines Day. Your expressions of love is great in this write. Love compared to flowers that will soon again bloom in freshness and renewed.Very sweet poem.

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Valsa George 14 February 2014

This day you left me And spring lost its flower forever The poem opens on a note of sadness.... but it ends with a touch of hope and 'flowers once again blooming on her pale face'! ! Enjoyed reading it! !

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Poetheart Morgan 14 February 2014

HOPE! ! ! HOPE! ! ! ! Finally the winter went away....gone....Now is time of a new bloom Poet.

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Sallam Yassin 14 February 2014

sweet and elegant piece of art Bhai

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Sayeed Abubakar 14 February 2014

Nice imagery. You have a true poetic genius.

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 14 February 2014

Nice and well written poem.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 14 February 2014

Then another high spring fallen to light purple Here we await spring. You wrote a beautiful one for the lost spring. Thank you.

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Vishal Sharma 14 February 2014

very heart touching and great poem to read

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