The Lost Soul Comments

surrounded by water stranded by known-- this is life's crux! a good write!

Beautiful poem. But I would react, Disillusioned of parts you found the whole. CP

Good imagery poem with deep meaning. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it

Good write here! you have nicely penned your inner feelings in this poem. felt the desperation embedded...10

You write with great feel for the suject allowing the reader to be interactive with the piece a good writer you are.10 from me

A good expression of your desperation for consolation admist your isolation.

enveloped by heads.............deep meaning indeed, as one has to play different roles at various times and one feels like a zombie on some days.........which may be longer than life.... good imagery........

a life that toils is well pictured there...nicely written piece Deepti...thanks...10

the poem expresses a state of mind in utter stress.the imagery of arid sand, heat contribute to the atmosphere of the poem, the external imagery reflect the mind of the poet graphically...thanx

The strain and the discomfort can be felt reading this. At times things get tough, but when a person has a good will, things change for the better. Best wishes.

Discomfort of the poet is quite evident in the poem. It seems the cause is, non-acceptance! Well dear, my good wishes! ! !

very aptly put the plight of being prisoner to curcumstances.... a good one indeed..

a soul sould'nt be stranded so....lovely poem

enveloped by heads chained by duties under the strenuous pressure lives like a Zombie.....! ------- true and well painted in words.......this applies to the inferior workers where they work like robots in demand from their superiors...running with time table doing this and that like robots..............10++++++