Sunday, December 31, 2006

The Lost Smile Comments

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The lost smile

a magic smile as a reverie
Oh! a life full of revelry
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prasanna kumari
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Edward Kofi Louis 23 March 2016

A smile totally forgotten! Nice piece of work.

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Ramesh Rai 29 September 2014

My smile is lost. what can bring it back.

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Piyush Dey 05 August 2014

smiles and smiles all over there in the poem. very gorgeously written, good one. enjoyed!

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lets keep on smiling....smiles lighten up our days... and give warmness away -thaks for your smiles...they are not lost

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Kee Thampi 12 January 2007

lovely carved writes your smile tickling my cheeks ah! raise me into the highest(of) peaks.........

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 31 December 2006

Prasanna>>>A Beautiful slice of Romance, so eloquently expressed...Your words mwork so well in empkoying the couplet stanzaec format...A fine penning, my dear HAPPY NEW YEAR! FJR

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