Thursday, May 4, 2017

The Lost Sheep Comments

Rating: 4.6

THE LOST SHEEP
Wandering in the wild
I search for my shepherd
Have yoyu seen him?
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SYAM CHANDRAN PERINKULAM
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Syam 23 April 2022

Thank u sir

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 12 April 2022

i really like the line of the saffon smile

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Beautiful but persuasive writing. Loved reading.

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Syam 23 April 2022

Thank u sir

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Nkosilathi Zinyane 22 May 2020

A lost sheep that has entered into my bosom this goes beyond general conceptions..there is a hovering transcendence here which is a sign of great mastery of holding the pen..A good poem

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 May 2017

A black lad who hid es a saffronsmile I was a lyre on his lap. Have you seen him? He saw Your entering in to my bossom Now in my exhiliarated temperament I sing……… I am in you…….you are in me…… Simply beautiful, mysterious, magical and esotheric thinking and a bit philosophical. A poet always searches…… and you are a real poet. Thank you. Tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 May 2017

Very good. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Gajanan Mishra 04 May 2017

great love, you are in me, I am in you.

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