Wednesday, October 30, 2019

The Lost Reverie Comments

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Receding night goes grinning whilst still grey,
Loosening grip on her night-long dark belt,
As frosty snow mellows slowly to melt,
As moon saunters to hide behind bright day,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Valsa George 31 October 2019

Beautiful description of the gradual arrival of dawn! After a sound sleep, when we wake up, we fail to recollect what we have been dreaming. Sometimes we cannot have even a faint memory! The transition of the night into day is beautifully delineated here.

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 October 2019

Another good poet liking this poem enough to comment on it calling it beautiful. Thank you dear poet, your views always weigh with me.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 October 2019

A wonderful poem that brings out the beauty in nature. Excellent write with superb imagery..

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 October 2019

It feels good you liked it, dear poet of note.

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