Wednesday, August 14, 2013

The Lost Lover Comments

Rating: 5.0

She hit paradise
That night.
Dark diamond ghosts
Glittering silver as they pranced
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George Price
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Jasbir Chatterjee 21 January 2016

Quite a tragedy, I must say. Nice write.

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Heather Wilkins 18 August 2013

good imagery in this poem well written enjoyed

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 16 August 2013

two opposite parts but into a coherent whole an interesting poem and enjoy to read it

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Jemima Rivas 15 August 2013

really good write, ...And loneliness compounded The horror of that lost love thanks George

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Urshula Davis 14 August 2013

This is a nice read. Thank you for this!

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Valerie Dohren 14 August 2013

A very inspired and imaginative write, poignant and moving.

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