Saturday, March 22, 2008

The Lost Love Comments

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My dreams once twinkled
Shined and glittered
In the vastness of my mind,
Now shattered,
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 December 2020

My dreams.....broken into bits..../Lie scattered down your feet.....scintillating poetic expression! A magnificent poem.......Top score!

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Aarzoo Mehek 27 July 2020

Very touchy and straight from your heart. Compliments.

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Captain Cur 04 March 2020

A painfully written, yet elegant and enchanting poem on love lost. There is beauty created through pain.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 February 2020

Powerful, poignant and touching poem. Words so beautifully woven to convey the deepest pains brought by lost love. A very heartfelt write so wonderfully crafted.

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Amitava Sur 20 August 2015

A poignant write about missing or losing the love you had once. Very nice.

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Shashendra Amalshan 28 July 2009

this one is so very beautiful indeed my dear sir.. i see you v written this from the core of your heart.. poetry is ever so beautiful when they are written from heart! ! ! ! I loved this one....... these days i m sort of restricted reading emotional ones though.... with lots of love to you// hope you are in fine health shan

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Smiley Hooker 24 July 2009

Who can understand the pain of losing a love than people in love. If it wasn't meant to be, someone better might come along your way, so save some love in your heart.Touching piece...smile, my friend! :)

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Danny H 25 May 2009

This was very very good: ] i love how you placed the image of someone just coming up an crushing your dreams: then leaving them broken just lying there

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Muhammad Ali 27 April 2009

O it is superb and i can breath it.... hmmm nice poem friend!

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a really toching poem..a bond if lost or neglected causes immense..you words had that pain...please read my 'a SMALL 'I' and a big 'me' and 'a song.....'

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Eyan Desir 31 January 2009

neat work... dear writer, , , ,

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Rudy Hossam 29 January 2009

great poem i love the choice of your words...thanks a lot for sharing

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premji premji 27 January 2009

keshavji........ a poet's life is something like that of a pendulum... it moves from one end to another in simple harmonic motion....... but the ends are very dangerous.....supreme bliss and grave depression.... a man with zero potential is not a poet.......... we walk through the knife edge separating life and madness....... a real squander............

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Dr Kamran Haider 22 January 2009

In breeze, The songs, you sang for me To soothe my ailing sense, Those threads of eternal love Woven into my heart, Now, upon your feet, Lie deserted in dust, In rotten rust, Can you say, you never Touched their strings? And they bear no pains? Such amazing words can only come through a heart who knows the pain of a lost love... great read, thanks for sharing it...

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Gargi Saha 22 January 2009

A wonderful poem. U get 10 +++++++++++

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Vaishali Shashi 21 January 2009

Good one. will find time to read all ur poems :) . Thanks for rating my poem :)

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Vaibhav Pandey 21 January 2009

this is fantastic write.... lost love is always hard to take in....leaves you with questions unanswered great as always...sir

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Bonnie Collins 09 January 2009

Beautifully written, and enjoyed the flow you gave this, short, but on the dime line after line, the exucute was excellent! ! Really good.... Enjoyed this very much, as I do alot of your writtings.... Bonnie

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Sandra Martyres 06 January 2009

Thanks for drawing my attention to your poem..The Lost Love which beutifully describes the emotions and touches a chord in the reader...Great piece of poetry

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Anjali Sinha 18 December 2008

the dreams -twinkled-shined-glittered now shattered-broken--bits lovely synonyms kesav +++++10 anjali

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

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