My dreams once twinkled
Shined and glittered
In the vastness of my mind,
Now shattered,
...
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A painfully written, yet elegant and enchanting poem on love lost. There is beauty created through pain.
Powerful, poignant and touching poem. Words so beautifully woven to convey the deepest pains brought by lost love. A very heartfelt write so wonderfully crafted.
A poignant write about missing or losing the love you had once. Very nice.
this one is so very beautiful indeed my dear sir.. i see you v written this from the core of your heart.. poetry is ever so beautiful when they are written from heart! ! ! ! I loved this one....... these days i m sort of restricted reading emotional ones though.... with lots of love to you// hope you are in fine health shan
Who can understand the pain of losing a love than people in love. If it wasn't meant to be, someone better might come along your way, so save some love in your heart.Touching piece...smile, my friend! :)
This was very very good: ] i love how you placed the image of someone just coming up an crushing your dreams: then leaving them broken just lying there
a really toching poem..a bond if lost or neglected causes immense..you words had that pain...please read my 'a SMALL 'I' and a big 'me' and 'a song.....'
great poem i love the choice of your words...thanks a lot for sharing
keshavji........ a poet's life is something like that of a pendulum... it moves from one end to another in simple harmonic motion....... but the ends are very dangerous.....supreme bliss and grave depression.... a man with zero potential is not a poet.......... we walk through the knife edge separating life and madness....... a real squander............
In breeze, The songs, you sang for me To soothe my ailing sense, Those threads of eternal love Woven into my heart, Now, upon your feet, Lie deserted in dust, In rotten rust, Can you say, you never Touched their strings? And they bear no pains? Such amazing words can only come through a heart who knows the pain of a lost love... great read, thanks for sharing it...
Good one. will find time to read all ur poems :) . Thanks for rating my poem :)
this is fantastic write.... lost love is always hard to take in....leaves you with questions unanswered great as always...sir
Beautifully written, and enjoyed the flow you gave this, short, but on the dime line after line, the exucute was excellent! ! Really good.... Enjoyed this very much, as I do alot of your writtings.... Bonnie
Thanks for drawing my attention to your poem..The Lost Love which beutifully describes the emotions and touches a chord in the reader...Great piece of poetry
the dreams -twinkled-shined-glittered now shattered-broken--bits lovely synonyms kesav +++++10 anjali
My dreams.....broken into bits..../Lie scattered down your feet.....scintillating poetic expression! A magnificent poem.......Top score!